The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came form and the chars show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the information
of
how Change preposition
on
money
was allocated to the police department in 2017 and 2018 in Britain. The table clearly shows Use synonyms
that
the sources of capital and how it was allotted.
Correct word choice
apply
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Linking Words
,
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officers
and staff's salaries were the highest Change noun form
officers'
officer's
money
spent Use synonyms
while
technology was the lowest. The majority of the capital was received from the national government.
In detail, the national government Linking Words
was
spent the highest amount of currency for the police budget and it had 175.5m in 2017 Unnecessary verb
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then
it Linking Words
was
increased by 177.8m in 2018. Unnecessary verb
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Likewise
, local Linking Words
taxes
cash was 91.2m in 2017 and it increased dramatically by 102.3m in 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
tax
Similarly
, other sources of capital in 2017, in 38m and it was 38.5 in 2018.
Linking Words
Furthermore
, in 2017, the majority of Linking Words
money
spent on Use synonyms
police's
salaries, which Change noun form
police
it
is three-quarters but it decreased in 2018, which is accounted for 69%. Surprisingly, buildings and Correct pronoun usage
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transport's
Change noun form
transport
money
were allocated equally in the given two periods, at 17 per cent. Use synonyms
In contrast
, technology capital was increased as compared to the previous year, which Linking Words
is
8% in 2017 and 14% in 2018.Wrong verb form
was
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