Some would argue
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nowdaysCorrect the word
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men and women
they Correct pronoun usage
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can shop
by using new
technology
,
while
otherFix the agreement mistake
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do not agree with that. I believe with first group because
this
in
technology
letCorrect subject-verb agreement
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us choose different shops and get
itCorrect pronoun usage
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.
On the one hand, New
technology
has bad
affectsReplace the word
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inChange preposition
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our
countryChange noun form
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economy
specificChange the word
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in trade,
local shops
they Correct pronoun usage
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buy to store rent and taxes and
other thingChange the wording
another thing
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, so these make their price higher than online stores.
As a result
, individuals prefer to
order
online to save their money, and
this
effectsReplace the word
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their
country
's economy
.
For example
, there is
surveyCorrect article usage
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showWrong verb form
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inChange preposition
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the
19, many
people
formCorrect your spelling
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online , and many local businesses closed.
However
, I believe that
people
should have
theirChange the word
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freedom to choose what they want and a government should take care of
country'sCorrect article usage
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economy.
On the other hand
,
this
modern
technology
improveChange the verb form
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our shopping ways, and it makes
orderFix the agreement mistake
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and shipping fastly. because
people
who live in small
townFix the agreement mistake
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they Correct pronoun usage
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do not have different shop stores, online stores give them different
.
For example
, men and women can
order
from Ali Baba
is Unnecessary verb
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a
app and they will get their
order
in one week. I believe
this
technology
helps
people
to get what they want from different
.
In conclusion,
although
shopping
from Change preposition
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online
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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sideAdd an article
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effect
inChange preposition
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country'sCorrect article usage
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income ,it does not mean we must
to Change the verb form
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buy from local shops.
this
helps us to have everything
and Correct word choice
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shipped
.