Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s society,

parents

use various methods to discipline their

children

; physical

punishment

is one of the punishments

that is

normally against the law. Some people believe that guardians should have the right to discipline the kids in

this

way.

However

, I am opposed to

this

approach because

children

are likely to have poor mental health and

also

cultivate

violence

, all of which will be discussed in

this

essay. One of the most severe downsides is that corporal

punishment

in the family might cause

mental

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breakdown in kids. To explain, the use of physical force like hitting or slapping leads to the creation of fear in

children

. It will cause the

children

to have low self-esteem and lack of confidence, resulting in disrespect

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themselves and continuing to think that they are worthless.

According to

the research, conducted by UNICEF Thailand, it reveals that

children

from

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families which discipline them by hitting them with

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hard

object

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tend to be silent

in class

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activities and rarely make eye contact with their classmates.

Moreover

, they usually have few friends and are afraid of making mistakes. Another negative effect that should not be overlooked is the cultivation of

violence

. To clarify, kids who grew up in a brutal environment have a tendency to normalize

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violence

, thinking that an assault is common because even their

parents

do

this

.

Therefore

, they are likely to learn to use violent

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to deal with stress or release their emotions.

For instance

, in the recent news, one student assaulted his friends and teachers with a stick because he had been pressured and stressed with his academic performance. He claimed that his

parents

used to hit him with a belt, so he thought it was normal to do physical

punishment

, To summarize, it is evident that

this

method is unacceptable as it can lead to numerous drawbacks which are mental health problems and normalization of

violence

.

Thus

,

parents

should find wiser ways to teach their

children

without using corporal

punishment

.