The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provided data about the amount of
member
for different activities in Melbourne, Fix the agreement mistake
members
Australisa
between 2000 and 2020 at one social centre.
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Australia
Overall
, Linking Words
according to
the given information, there was a substantial difference among these activities. They ranged from 0 to 65 Linking Words
participants
per activity.
First of all, Use synonyms
film
club Correct article usage
the film
leaded
the attendance chart with 64 Correct your spelling
led
people
in 2000. Use synonyms
Besides
, musical performances did not attract any Linking Words
members
in the same year until 2005. Use synonyms
Secondly
, these hobbies tended to increase Linking Words
at the end
of the year 2020, Linking Words
exception
with amateur dramatics. In 2000, Replace the word
except
amateur dramatics
had over 25 Correct your spelling
Amateur Dramatics
participants
, and continuously grew Use synonyms
into
28 Change preposition
to
members
in 2005. Use synonyms
However
, the number of Linking Words
people
went down significantly, to only about 5 Use synonyms
people
in 2020.
Another point worth noting is that martial arts had a larger number of Use synonyms
participants
than table tennis Use synonyms
by
about 20 Change preposition
with
people
in 2000. Use synonyms
However
, they intersected near the beginning of 2015 with a number of Linking Words
participants
ranging from 33 to 34 Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
In addition
, table tennis climbed to 52 Linking Words
members
in 2020, leaving martial Use synonyms
art
with a barely increased membership of 34 Fix the agreement mistake
arts
members
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words participants, people, members with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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