In recent times, there is no doubt that
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of
crime
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people believe that the
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technology. It can prevent and save
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both views and I will draw my personal conclusion.
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people.
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from a bad person or habit.
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reason
is the punishment of any
crime
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,
that is
why some think that they must be preventing any
crime
to avoid any punishment. What is more , the
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their children.
For instance
, parents can talk with them about how to protect themselves against anyone badly.
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disadvantage of…l is ……
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more advantages than disadvantages….