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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
#maps #university #sports #courts
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The presented maps give information
development
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 which took place in
sport
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sports
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 courses from 1990 to the present day.
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Linking Words
, as can be seen comparison of
two
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the two
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 maps
show
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shows
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transformation
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a transformation
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 to
developed
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a developed
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court
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 with
new
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a new
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 basketball and tennis
court
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,
fitness
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and fitness
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 centre. The park with trees has been removed to a basketball
court
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 in the
north east
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northeast
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 of
map
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the map
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. The car park on the south of
park
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the park
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 was transformed into a tennis
court
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. In the east of the map has been added a building with reception, café and indoor pool which was remained. The changing room
has been enlarged which
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is
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 located on the south of
pool
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the pool
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. In the south of
new
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the new
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building
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building,
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 the tennis
court
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 has been made into
fitness
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the fitness
a fitness
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 centre.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words court with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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