The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar graph illustrates the breakdown of various annual
income
groups (in percentages) belonging to
cities
and regional
centres
of Australia.
Overall
, the most common
income
category in
cities
is the
middle
class
whereas
in the regional
centres
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centres,
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it is the lower
middle
class
. In general, people living in the city earn more than those who live in regional
centres
. With regard to
cities
, 35% of the population
belong
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belongs
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to the
middle
class
($70,000 to $120,000)
income
bracket.
However
, the lower
middle
class
($40,000 to $70,000) accounts for 30% of the population. In regional
centres
, a reverse trend is observed with around 34% belonging to the lower
middle
class
and just over 25% in the
middle
class
. Low incomes ($40,000 or less) are less common in the
cities
in comparison to the regional
centres
at around 13% and 22% respectively. Interestingly, the difference between the given areas in the
high
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high-income
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income
bracket ($120,000 or more) is only 5% more in the city when compared to regional
centres
at 15% of the population.
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