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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the diagram provided highlights the different arrangements of the public
library
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 during two decades.
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, most of the areas showcased significant modification during the given time period, especially in areal functions and activities, which reflected the
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 awareness of education and the change in terms of technology growth. To probe more deeply, the floor plan two decades ago was more focused on traditional
library
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 services,
such
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 as CDs, videos,
computer
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 games,
as well as
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 a reading room for newspapers and magazines and a manual enquiry desk.
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, the current floor plan demonstrated a broader educational vision.The previous entertainment area for CDs and other digital materials was transformed into
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 for storytelling events and comfortable sofas, fostering a more engaging and interactive environment for children.Plus, the addition of a lecture room emphasizes the
library
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's role as a hub for educational events and community learning.
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, the introduction of a computer room signifies the
library
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's commitment to digital literacy, and the enquiry desk replaced by information desk and self-service machines shows the technical evolution of
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library
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. In sum, the
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rising
conscious
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 of education
and
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apply
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community learning and technology
implement
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 the role of
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the central
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library
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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