The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the graph provided highlights the figure for three different materials’ average value changes recorded monthly in 2014.
Overall
, there was a dramatic drop in the nickel’s Linking Words
price
, turning it from the top to the bottom in the first half of the year. Noticeably, in the second half of the year, all three metals have shared a similar pattern of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
price changing
proportion, shortening the Add a hyphen
price-changing
price
gap between each other by the end of the given time period.
To probe more deeply, the Use synonyms
price
change of nickel was the highest in January, which was 6 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percentage
higher than December’s; Replace the word
per cent
however
, it had dropped 5 Linking Words
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percentage
just during two months. Despite there Replace the word
per cent
was
a Replace the word
being
slightly
level between March and May, it Change the word
slight
then
significantly dropped sharply, reaching minus 3 Linking Words
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percentage
by June.
Replace the word
per cent
In contrast
, copper Linking Words
also
witnessed a more stable Linking Words
price
decrease during the first six months, the Use synonyms
price
never fell over 1 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percentage
.
Replace the word
per cent
Furthermore
, what should be particularly mentioned is that the Linking Words
price
tendency of zinc was the most stable one among all, Use synonyms
however
, it had a gradual Linking Words
price
change Use synonyms
at
February.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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