the table show the average length of video advertisements on the internet and average length of time viewers spend watching them summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisions where revelant.

the table show the average length of video advertisements on the internet and average length of time viewers spend watching them

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisions where revelant.
The table provided below illustrates the information of 10 types of advertising
videos
on
internet
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and
correlation
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the correlation
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between their length and the time spent
on
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watching them by internet users.
Overall
,
average
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the average
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online advertisement
videos
are 22. 4
seconds
long and viewers watched for an average
10
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of 10
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. 7
seconds
. As given in the data, it is noticeable that public service ad
video
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videos
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had the highest
duration
(45. 8
seconds
) and the viewing time by online users
were
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highest
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the highest
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(18. 5
seconds
). It is worth mentioning that with the
duration
,
videos
connected to public service are followed by automotive
videos
(27. 2 sec) and entertainment
videos
(27. 8 sec). Their average watching
duration
is approximately 12
seconds
. The
videos
connected to financial services are played online
for16
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for 16
. 3
seconds
, which is followed by home furnishing
videos
with 10. 0
seconds
, pharmaceuticals with 6. 3
seconds
and consumer electronics with 7. 1
seconds
respectively. As
about
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for
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the clothing advertisements, they have
shortest
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the shortest
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length and were watched
with
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for
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6. 0
seconds
accordingly
.
Overall
, the services which
costs
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cost
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a lot have
longer
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a longer
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duration
,
while
videos
connected
less
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to less
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costed products or services are shorter and
experienced
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experience
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the
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apply
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less viewing time by online customers
accordingly
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