The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the number of temporary employees worked between 2003 to 2006, in four nations,
Australia
, New Zealand
, The United Kingdom and the United States of America and the number of staff members per thousand people in 2006.
Overall
, the figure of overseas workers worked more in the United States of America as compared to other countries and Australia
was in the second position where folks worked but it increased in the USA and the least workers worked in New Zealand
, moreover
, people worked per thousand more in New Zealand
as compared to the rest nations.
It is conspicuous that in 2003, migrants worked 577,000, which was the highest total among all countries. Australia
was in the second highest position 152,000 in the same year. The United Kingdom and New Zealand
were 137,00 and 65,000 respectively in 2003.
Probing ahead, the sum of labourers increased in the USA to 678,000 in 2006. In addition
, the UK showed major growth reaching 266,00 in 2006. Whereas
Australia
experienced a rise of 219,000 in 2006, which was also
a good increment and attracted overseas workers. New Zealand
was at least a position which only hired 87,000 professionals in 2006. Furthermore
, in 2006 New Zealand
hired 21.1 per thousand people, which was the highest statistic as compared to other nations and least was the USA only employed 2.3 per 1000 in 2006.Submitted by rbtech65 on
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