The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The present two maps illustrate the development of Nelson
City
from 2000 to today.
It is obvious, that the Use synonyms
city
has evolved since 2000, so the facilities have been increasing so much; Use synonyms
furthermore
, the Linking Words
city
is longer than past.
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According to
the picture of 2000, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
city
had less equipment. Use synonyms
In addition
, the main reason that people went to the Linking Words
city
was the university which did not have a dormitory. Use synonyms
Also
, people could go to the Linking Words
city
by car or train because the Use synonyms
city
had an old train station, but the Use synonyms
city
in the past had a vegetation area.
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However
, currently, the Linking Words
city
has a really good alternative Use synonyms
due to
the fact near the University is built hall of residence, and it is forbidden to use cars in the Linking Words
city
centre; Use synonyms
As a result
, you must rent a bike or walk; Linking Words
moreover
, now Nelson has different types of markets which are shopping centre, new shop Linking Words
instead
of the old shop and covered; Linking Words
furthermore
, they build a new place or eating in the port zone that have restaurants, bars, and clubs.Linking Words
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