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The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the percentage of the top four transportation means that
people
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use
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 in Edmonton, and the table shows the purposes of using a
car
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 in the city.
It is clear that
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 a large number of
people
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 tend to
use
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cars
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 and light rail transit
instead
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 of buses and taxis.
Also
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, most
people
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use
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 a
car
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 to go to work or for business purposes.
According to
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 the pie chart, we can see that most
people
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use
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cars
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 and LRTs. To be precise, 45% of individuals in Edmonton
use
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cars
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, and with a slight difference, 35% prefer LRTs. The percentages of
people
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 who choose to take a bus or taxi are equal to each other, only 10%. Looking at the table, which shows why
people
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use
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 a
car
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 in the city, we can see that more than half of the citizens who
use
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 a
car
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 are because they want to commute to work. Interestingly, 45% of them said they
use
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cars
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 for business purposes, and with 5 per cent less, 40% of
people
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 acknowledged they
use
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 a
car
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 for taking their children to school. The least significant reasons why
people
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 prefer a
car
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 over other means of transportation are for shopping and leisure activities, which account for 15% of each.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, use, car, cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transportation modes
  • car ownership
  • proportion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • transportation habits
  • environmental awareness
  • government policies
  • public transport infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • congestion
  • environmental quality
  • future implications
  • adapt
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