The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of the top four transportation means that
people
use
in Edmonton, and the table shows the purposes of using a car
in the city.
It is clear that
a large number of people
tend to use
cars
and light rail transit instead
of buses and taxis. Also
, most people
use
a car
to go to work or for business purposes.
According to
the pie chart, we can see that most people
use
cars
and LRTs. To be precise, 45% of individuals in Edmonton use
cars
, and with a slight difference, 35% prefer LRTs. The percentages of people
who choose to take a bus or taxi are equal to each other, only 10%.
Looking at the table, which shows why people
use
a car
in the city, we can see that more than half of the citizens who use
a car
are because they want to commute to work. Interestingly, 45% of them said they use
cars
for business purposes, and with 5 per cent less, 40% of people
acknowledged they use
a car
for taking their children to school. The least significant reasons why people
prefer a car
over other means of transportation are for shopping and leisure activities, which account for 15% of each.Submitted by amir1375.6 on
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