The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.
The pie charts detail the proportion of people’s total expenditure on six different
goods
and services (housing, clothing, entertainment, food, travel/transport, and luxury goods
), in a European country, in 1958 and 2008.
It is clear from the charts that spending in all aspects, except clothing, changed quite substantially over the fifty year
period.
In 1958, people spent the largest portion of their spending on food, at 32%. The two other categories that took up the majority of people’s money were housing, at 22%, and clothing at 18%. Entertainment, travel/transport and luxury Add a hyphen
fifty-year
goods
only comprised around a quarter of all spending at 18%, 8% and &% respectively.
50 years later spending changed quite significantly with housing now becoming the biggest expense and taking up almost one third
of total spending, at 32%. The expenditure on clothing, transport/travel and luxury Add a hyphen
one-third
goods
all increased and all took up around 16-17% of the total spending. The expenditure on food dropped significantly to 12%, while
entertainment costs were only half of that.Submitted by kkhanhnhitr0801 on
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