A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages arid disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Nowadays, different countries are noting to the
tourism
discipline.
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main
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the main
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source of income, especially
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economically
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increasing our state.
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,
tourism
has become
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a very
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bad influence
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the state's environment, and it is causing many more problems. In
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essay, I will try to discuss both
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and negative sides of
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and draw a conclusion. From one perspective, there are several benefits of
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speciality. The first merit of it is considered to be that the becoming
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and poor cities into rich
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and
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luxurious cities.
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, developing
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different places and
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scenes
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.
For example
, cafes, restaurants, buildings and surroundings. Especially,
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the rising
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of labourers and job centres. After all,
tourism
is very commercial . Currently, many states are going
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into
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the
tourism
industry
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which
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provides good money. From
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, despite
mentioned
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positives, it has some
disadvantes
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disadvantages
. One of the major
disadvantes
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disadvantages
disadvantage
of it is that the
tourism
discipline has
become
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very
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a very
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bad effect
to
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our
life
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lives
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.
Furthermore
, our environment is
arising
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different rubbish boxes and harmful pollutants.
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it is poisoning our weather with soft water
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.
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many people are moving to
another countries
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. Cause in point, local population and poor humans.
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stratification and death of poison
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among
the population. Another important demerit is that many cities are desecrating. In conclusion,
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tourism
is outperform
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to
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the village industry and
placing
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place
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. The
tourism
industry can offer several positives,
there
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but there
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may be some drawbacks too. From my personal point of view,
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the advantage
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advantage
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advantages
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of
this
will outweigh the disadvantages.
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grammar vocabulary
Work on grammatical accuracy and range to improve the clarity and readability of your essay.
grammar vocabulary
Try to use more specific and varied vocabulary to elaborate on your points effectively.
task response
Develop your ideas more fully with additional examples and detailed explanations.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next to improve cohesion.
coherence cohesion
The essay provides a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
task response
You have identified both advantages and disadvantages of tourism in your essay, addressing the task prompt appropriately.
coherence cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the arguments made in the essay.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable tourism
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • hospitality industry
  • tourist influx
  • cultural commodification
  • ecological footprint
  • economic diversification
  • carrying capacity
  • cultural sensitivity
  • destination marketing
  • travel advisories
  • visitor management
  • impact assessment
  • tourism revenues
  • authentic experience
  • visitor satisfaction
  • conservation efforts
  • seasonal fluctuation
  • social sustainability
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