You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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table shows employment and education rates for 8 countries in Europe in 2015. It is clear from the data presented in the table that, people from age 25 to 64 years old with coolage
or university education rate is positively Correct your spelling
college
collage
corrolated
with average income and employment rate.
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correlated
Acoording
to what is shown, the percentage of people employed in Austria, Norway and the United Kingdom Correct your spelling
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are
above 70 Correct subject-verb agreement
is
percent
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per cent
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employees in these countries 25-64 years old with higher degrees have Correct word choice
The
average
income between 20,945 to 41,48 annually.
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an average
In contrast
, Greece came at
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