The given pie charts compare statistics for the yearly expenses of 5 different categories by a specific school in the United Kingdom between 1981 and 2001
The two pie charts illustrate information about five different categories in which spending
in school between 1989 and 2001 in the United Kingdom.
Overall
, it is clear from the two graphs that the percentage of teachers' salaries was a higher trend during 20 years, while
the insurance category was at a lower point in the United Kingdom.
According to
what was shown, the category of teachers' salaries in 2001 was a slight rise to a half percentage, while
it was 40% in 1981. What is more, the ratio of other workers was 28% in 1981 and it fell down to 22% which was around about 6%.
Added to what was shown, the resources books had an equal number as furniture and equipment category in 1981. It was about 15%. On the other hand
, in 2001, the number of resource books increased slowly to a quarter , while
the rate of furniture and equipment dropped sharply to 5%.Submitted by almeem
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