The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
A line
graphs
indicates the difference in terms of ownership of washing Correct the article-noun agreement
graph
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and vacuum cleaner ownership in a country between the years 1920 and 2019. Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
Whereas
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other
graph illustrates the hours of duty per house per week in the same time interval.
All three electrical devices had followed an uprising trend over Correct article usage
the other
this
century. Which, Linking Words
resulted
a decrease in the time spent Add the preposition
resulted in
resulted from
in
house chores.
Even thoughChange preposition
on
,
refrigerator ownership was almost none in 1920, it became Remove the comma
apply
must-buy
product with Correct article usage
a must-buy
also
vacuum cleaner by 2000. Linking Words
While
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,
Remove the comma
apply
washing
machineCorrect article usage
the washing
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