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The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts provide details about
exports
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 both from
Vietnam
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 to the US and from the US to
Vietnam
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 for millions of dollars.
Overall
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, the most lucrative export from
Vietnam
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 to the US is coffee
while
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 for the US its biggest export to
Vietnam
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 is Aircraft parts. In decreasing order, the five main
exports
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 from
Vietnam
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 to the US are coffee, fruit and vegetables, seafood, rice and garments. The two largest of these are coffee, and fruit and vegetables, which are worth $23
million
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 and $16
million
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 respectively. The other products are all worth significantly less, with seafood and rice both at around $4
million
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 and garments making up $2
million
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. Another $2
million
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 comes from other unnamed
exports
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. For US
exports
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 to
Vietnam
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, aircraft parts bring in substantially more money than all other categories, at $72
million
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.
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, the next largest
exports
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 are other and machinery at $35 and $30.5
million
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 respectively. The
exports
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 which provide the least money are fertiliser, cotton and cars which are all below $17
million
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, vietnam, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • import/export balance
  • sector
  • percentage
  • relative importance
  • comparative analysis
  • similarities and differences
  • noteworthy
  • primary sector
  • secondary sector
  • contribute
  • overall export profile
  • main features
  • summarize
  • context
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