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The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart and table give information about the modes of transportation and the different reasons for using a motor
car
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 in Edmonton.
Overall
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, the pie chart shows that under half of the population
use
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 a motor
car
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 to go to different places and one-third population uses the Light Rail to commute. The table gives the number of reasons men and women
use
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 a
car
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 in the city. The big majority of people
use
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 a
car
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 to go to other places
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 45% of the total respectively. The proportion of train users is nearly a third
such
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 as 35%.
However
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, a small minority take buses or taxis to commute, which is 20% for both. There are a number of causes for the
use
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 of a motor vehicle in Edmonton. The primary reason for using a
car
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 is an office in the city.
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 around 50% of the people go by
car
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 for work and business. A very least number
use
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 a
car
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 for shopping and leisure activities. Two-fifth of men and women take their kids to school by
car
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transportation modes
  • car ownership
  • proportion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • transportation habits
  • environmental awareness
  • government policies
  • public transport infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • congestion
  • environmental quality
  • future implications
  • adapt
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