The two tables below show statistics of workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two tables describe the statistics of foreign and US
employees
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employee's
employees'
birth
in the United States which are measured in millions and Correct subject-verb agreement
births
catagorized
by gender Correct your spelling
categorised
last
year.
In the first table, it was shown that there were significantly fewer workers
of foreign birth
in the US compared to the number
of employees who were born in the US. The total number
of workers
of foreign birth
was 24,357 workers
; while
,
the figure of Remove the comma
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workers
of US birth
was 129,533 workers
. The highest number
of workforce from
foreign and domestic Change preposition
of
birth
by age was different, with most of the foreign
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foreign-birth
birth
citizens at 35-44 years old; whereas
, US
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US-birth
birth
workers
were mostly at the age of 25-34 years old.
Furthermore
, the number
of employed and unemployed workers
of both foreign and native birth
had significant differences. There were lesser
amount of people who were hired for foreign Add an article
a lesser
birth
compared to US birth
with a total of 21,969 workers
; while
,
the total amount of employed US-born citizens was 117,095 people. Remove the comma
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Moreover
, the number
of unemployed workers
had the same trend with 2,388 unemployed foreign birth
workers
,
and 12,438 US Remove the comma
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birth
workers
.
To conclude
, there was a significant gap in numbers between the workers
of native and foreign birth
in the US, as there were notably more numbers of US birth
workers
compared to foreign birth
workers
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