The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The diagram illustrates the data of the sketched places of two schools in the city of Canterbury. In overview, there

is

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are

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two different areas

which

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plotted to build a college,

this

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first one is in

rural

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a rural

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area and the other one will be in

CBD

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.

To begin

with, school number one will be located

at

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the east side of Canterbury town and Sturry is highly populated with approximately 7000 people.

Furthermore

, the second school is in Town Centre with less congestion,

thus

, it's about five

killometres

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kilometres

travel from the Central Business District to the Sturry community area,

however

, to

Chartham

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Chartham,

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it's about 7

killometres

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kilometres

drive,

hence

,

this

society

consist

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of 4 500 humans.

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,

university

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the university

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is

on

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in

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the North of Canterbury, whilst,

countryside

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the countryside

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occupied

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all over

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both sides ground.To add on,

Town

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the Town

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Centre is

also

sorrounded

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surrounded

with

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by

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the

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buildings and

lastly

,

main

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road connects the area of Chartham and Sturry at the same time.