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The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare data about the percentage of
Yemen
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 and Italy citizens in 3 different ages( 0-14, 15-59, and
people
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 who are more than 60) in 2 various years( 2000 and 2050).
Overall
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, the proportion of younger generations in
Yemen
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 was higher than in Italy
instead
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 of the old
people
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;
thereafter
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, both countries will have fewer younger
people
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, but the percentage in Italy will be higher than in
Yemen
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.
According to
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 the diagrams in 2000,
Yemen
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’s inhabitants had these sections, teenager, middle age, and old
people
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 respectively 50.1, 46.3, 3.6 per
cent
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.
However
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, a large number of Italy natives aged between 15 and 59 at 61.6%;
then
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people
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 upper 60 and teenagers at 24.1 and 14.3 per
cent
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.
Nevertheless
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, these situations will be worse in 2050, because for
Yemen
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 the population of middle-aged and elderly
people
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 will be increased by 11 and 2 per
cent
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, yet children will be reduced by 13%.
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, for Italy, we can see the same trend. To illustrate, older
people
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 will become 2 times over society in 2000, and not only
people
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 between 15-59 but
also
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 children will be reduced by 25 and 3 per
cent
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, people, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age distribution
  • population demographics
  • projected
  • projections
  • notable changes
  • demographic changes
  • implications
  • birth rates
  • life expectancy
  • senior citizens
  • young population
  • working-age population
  • dependency ratio
  • aging population
  • socio-economic impact
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