The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area fo britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show hoe it was distributed.
The table and the chart illustrate information on the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.
Also
,The table explains the source of incomes and the charts show how it was expenditure.
Overall
, there were three basic sources of the money : (National Government, Local Taxes, and Other sources) .Furthermore
, the money spend in three ways :( Salaries, Technology, and Building and transport).
Initially
, the total of budget in 2017 was 304.7 million pounds and 318.6 million pounds in 2018.
In addition
, the most income came from the National Government (17.5 , 177.8) in given currancy in the years of 2017 1nd 2018 repectively.Moreover
, the lowest budget was from other sources such
as grant which were 38m in 2017 and 38.5 m in 2018.
On the other hand
, the most money was spent to cover the salaries for the officers and staff in the police station 75% and 69% for f0r 2017 amd 2018. Then
,followed by 17% expenditure was in buildind and transport in both years. The technology was recorded the minimum amount of spent in 2017 and 2018 by (8% and 14%) repectively.Submitted by enass on
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