The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart shows data about a person's individual money spent on
water
(11.5 litres to be precise), in the currency of US dollars, per day for Tanzania, Uganda, Pakistan, the
UK
and the US. And, the
cost
as a percentile of regular payment is
also
included in the graph.
Overall
, the
cost
is the most expensive in Tanzania by far, followed by Uganda in second place, with the
cost
of 6.4 and 4.1 cents.
Whereas
, the
UK
and the US have the cheapest
cost
, with 1.3 and 0.85 cents daily.
Also
, regarding the data, the
cost
of
water
in Pakistan is much more affordable compared to Tanzania and Uganda, with 1.76 cents. Looking at the chart,
it is clear that
as a percentile of a regular wage, the difference is even greater but on the same general trend. Tanzanians and Ugandans spend 5.7% and 3.2% of their income,
while
the
UK
and the US citizens only pay 0.013% and 0.006% of their daily salary. Despite, the
cost
of
water
is
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almost the same in Pakistan and the
UK
, people in the
UK
are 100 times more likely to afford daily
water
. To summarize, more developed countries have smaller costs of
water
and it covers a smaller percentage of their wage.
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