The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The vertical bar chart took place in five Australian cities in the period over four weeks past. The picture demonstrates the survey’s outcome related to people’s habits of purchasing and drinking
coffee
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and tea. The data are provided in percentages and it has three categories: those people who prefer buying fresh
coffee
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, others who choose to obtain
instant
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coffee
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, and
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finally
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there are others who either prefer to have a drink or a
coffee
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in a
coffee
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shop. Even though Sydney is the capital of Australia, Melbourne held 64% of people having
coffee
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or tea in a café enjoying outside activities and social interaction. Following the same trend, in an unknown global city called Hobart and its citizens around 63% decided to drink
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or tea
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in a
coffee
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shop. The category of having
instant
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coffee
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outlined as one revealed the lowest percentage in five cities in
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survey. Sydney and Melbourne were almost even with around 45% and just over 40% respectively. Surprisingly, between Brisbane Adelaide and Hobart the
last
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one overcame the two previous ones by holding nearly 40% of Hobart’s citizens preferred
instant
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coffee
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.
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Adelaide detained 50% of the people’s habit of either buying
instant
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coffee
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or fresh
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To conclude
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the survey provided data that demonstrated how variable the habits of those five Australian municipalities are. Hobart was the municipality spotlighted among the others most globally known.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, instant with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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