The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The pie charts, there are three pie charts in a gap of a decade
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1996, 2006, and 2016, which include the
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related to languages
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spoke
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by natives of
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Canada. In overview, in all three terms,
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the english
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english
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English
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language
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half of
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the popultion
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popultion
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population
of the country.
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french
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French
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and
other
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one is
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language
,
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both
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as a minor vocal in comparison
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english
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. In 1996,
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holds
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held
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60% of citizens in speaking, to compare, in 2006, it slightly decreased
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58%
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is
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1% more than
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year 2016. In the total term of the 30 years, analysing a bit
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but, it is spoken by
majority
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a majority
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of the public.
Language
french
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is
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communicated
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by 23% of
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Canadian
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, meanwhile, it declined by 1%,
as
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compare
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with Non-official speech, it rose by 3%,
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in the report of 2016, french slightly decreased by 1%, surprisingly, Non-official tounge again added 1 more percentage. local communication is only one category which gradually
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by
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every single term, resemblance, other both
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speeches
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are had
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have
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a
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irregularity
by
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every ten years. In conclusion,
english
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English
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is the most familiar
language
amongst major mankind, meanwhile, others are considerable as
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a non-popular vocal
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.
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,
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tongue is only the
language
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every ten years.
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