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Your Neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your Neighbour's. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologies describe what action you will take Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr. Smith, I hope
this
 letter finds you in good health and best of spirits. I have read your complaint letter of high noise disturbance that you faced from my flat. Actually, I was renovating my kitchen
thus
, everything was getting changed, including all electrical appliances,
drawer
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drawers
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, and everything. Due
this
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 construction work, you faced relentless trouble. Please accept my sincere apologies for
this
 issue. I agree that the noise was disruptive and quite frustrating. Sorry, all
this
 renovation was extremely necessary for me,
unfortunately
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 it has disturbed all the neighbours. As the
c0onstruction
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construction
 actions have irritated people a lot,
therefore
, we have decided not to work after 4 pm when it is time for people to relax.
Furthermore
, I have filed a complaint to the building committee as well for not making the walls
sound prove
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. I hope you accept my apology. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.
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task achievement
Be mindful of typographical errors such as 'prove' which should be 'proof'.
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Avoid mistakes in word choice like 'c0onstruction' instead of 'construction'.
coherence cohesion
Consider extending the opening paragraph to provide a more detailed context.
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You have clearly explained the reasons for the noise and taken responsibility.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
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You have maintained a polite and apologetic tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph is focused on a single idea, making it easier to follow.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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