Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter:
Give a brief description of the business
Mention what you’d like to be there on the website
Provide some ideas on use of images on the web site.
letter finds you in excellent circumstances and you are doing well. I am writing
for
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requaire
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require
requires
you about
site
do you have been
useing
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using
in your
business
. As I know your
business
always make customer
inresting
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interesting
investing
.
Moreover
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you have good
advertisment
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advertisement
advertising
.
I have been doing my
busness
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business
for 3 years ago
wich
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which
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focus
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on furniture.
However
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there are few
of
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customer
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customers
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in my marketplace.
therefore
, I would like
to
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you to
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please teach me how to make
website
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a website
the website
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and to be able to
crawded
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crawl
visit
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visits
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in my
business
such
as how to make an
advertisment
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advertisement
and how to set your
suplay
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supply
and demand
in
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your
site
.
on
this
occasion
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i
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would say that using several
image
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images
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things in my
site
i
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believe that there are
make
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people
intrest
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interested
interest
in my
business
. in
additon
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addition
add some
fiture
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feature
in
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site
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the site
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and
makeing
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make it
customer
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customers
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eassy
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easy
to choose items.
thank you so much for your attention
in
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advance i hope your
business
alwasy coutinue
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always continues
in
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the futere
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futere
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future
.
warm wishes.
habib
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.
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Grammar
Reviewing and polishing your grammar and sentence structure would enhance clarity and readability.
Task Achievement
Try to provide more detailed information regarding the elements you’d like to include on your website.
Task Achievement
The letter contains a clear and polite request for help with creating a website.
Writing Tone
The intent and purpose of the letter are well-conveyed and polite.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
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