The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff

members across the faculties of a major university in 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females who worked as academic
staff
members
in the major universities divided into
faculties
in 2016.
Overall
,
women
were the biggest percentage who worked in any
faculties
and it can be seen that in engineering
faculties
females became the highest proportion rather than
men
,
while
in education
men
were the highest than
women
. In detail, the highest percentage of
women
who worked in any
faculties
were in engineering, business, science, and law. The engineering
department
accounted for the most dominant with
women
who worked as academic
staff
members
were 85% rather than
men
at around 18%,
this
was a small percentage for
men
. Followed by the business
department
around 62% of the academic
staff
members
were
women
while
men
only 35%, same with the science
department
where 62% of
women
worked as academic
staff
there and for
men
only half of
women
.
Besides
that, in the medicine
department
, the total of
men
and
women
working in
this
department
was almost the same around 50%, 50% for
men
and 49% for
women
.
In contrast
, in the education
department
, males had the highest proportion working as academic
staff
members
rather than
women
about 72% and
women
only 25%,
meanwhile
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in the art
department
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department,
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there were 58% of males worked as academic
staff
while
women
only 42%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words staff, members, faculties, women, men, department with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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