The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females who worked as academic
staff
members
in the major universities divided into faculties
in 2016.
Overall
, women
were the biggest percentage who worked in any faculties
and it can be seen that in engineering faculties
females became the highest proportion rather than men
, while
in education men
were the highest than women
.
In detail, the highest percentage of women
who worked in any faculties
were in engineering, business, science, and law. The engineering department
accounted for the most dominant with women
who worked as academic staff
members
were 85% rather than men
at around 18%, this
was a small percentage for men
. Followed by the business department
around 62% of the academic staff
members
were women
while
men
only 35%, same with the science department
where 62% of women
worked as academic staff
there and for men
only half of women
. Besides
that, in the medicine department
, the total of men
and women
working in this
department
was almost the same around 50%, 50% for men
and 49% for women
.
In contrast
, in the education department
, males had the highest proportion working as academic staff
members
rather than women
about 72% and women
only 25%, meanwhile
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department,
staff
while
women
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