In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The never-ending debate on the necessity of dedicating

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substantial

budgets

into

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building new

railways

that connect cities with fast trains

,

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is a big concern in many

contries

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countries

as some agree and others highlight the importance of

investingin

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investing in

improving the available

transportation

systems that are likely to be less time-consuming and expensive.

However

, I ,personally, believe the best approach lies somewhere in between these two extremes. People who

favor

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the

construction

of new

railways

argue that there are several benefits to

this

measure.

Firstly

, they contend that building new

railways

can improve the

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overall

transportation

system of the country. The newly built paths,

in other words

, will be constructed based on modern engineering plans and materials which ,

consequently

, will result in more advanced and standard

railways

. Another reason,

however

, is the possibility of

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construction

of new paths that

interests

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some groups of people.

This

is to say, if the

goverments

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government

governments

invest in building new

railways

, the

emgineers

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engineers

will have the opportunity to brainstorm some possible routes that would offer faster

transportation

. Meanwhile, some claim that the best approach is to stick to the already-existing

transportation

system and plan on improving its condition. The logic

is

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originated from the fact that

development

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the development

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of available

infarastructure rquires

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infrastructure requires

less time and financial resources compared to building them from scratch. Meaning that

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society can benefit from the fast results of

improvement

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the improvement

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more than the promised

ide od

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idea of

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construction

. In conclusion, despite the contradictory opinions on building new

railways

versus focusing on improving what already exists, in my

viewed

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opinion, it is the

countries

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best approach to take both sides into

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consideration

with

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dedicating a balanced budget to

construction

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the construction

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of new

railways

and improving the quality of existing

transportation

systems.

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way, the country

take

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advantage of the

potental befetis

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potential benefits

of both discussed perspectives.