The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of retail store
closures
and openings
from 2011 to 2018, highlighting fluctuations over this
period.
In 2011, 8,500 stores closed, while
6,500 new stores opened. By 2012, the number
of closures
dropped sharply to 4,000, and the number
of openings
also
decreased slightly to 6,000. Between 2013 and 2014, there was a steady increase in new store
openings
from 4,000 in 2012 to 6,000 in 2014. Meanwhile, the number
of store
closures
rose to 7,200 in 2013 before falling back to 6,500 in 2014, resulting in more closures
than openings
for that year.
In 2015, both figures plummeted, with store
closures
reaching their lowest point at 500, and new store
openings
also
dropping significantly to 4,000. From 2015 to 2017, the number
of closures
stabilized at this
low level, while
the number
of new stores started to rise in 2016 to 5,000, remaining constant until 2018. However
, in the final year, store
openings
declined again to 3,000.Submitted by rianadmaja on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, store, closures, openings with synonyms.
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