The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of retail Use synonyms
store
Use synonyms
closures
and Use synonyms
openings
from 2011 to 2018, highlighting fluctuations over Use synonyms
this
period.
In 2011, 8,500 stores closed, Linking Words
while
6,500 new stores opened. By 2012, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
closures
dropped sharply to 4,000, and the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
openings
Use synonyms
also
decreased slightly to 6,000. Between 2013 and 2014, there was a steady increase in new Linking Words
store
Use synonyms
openings
from 4,000 in 2012 to 6,000 in 2014. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
store
Use synonyms
closures
rose to 7,200 in 2013 before falling back to 6,500 in 2014, resulting in more Use synonyms
closures
than Use synonyms
openings
for that year.
In 2015, both figures plummeted, with Use synonyms
store
Use synonyms
closures
reaching their lowest point at 500, and new Use synonyms
store
Use synonyms
openings
Use synonyms
also
dropping significantly to 4,000. From 2015 to 2017, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
closures
stabilized at Use synonyms
this
low level, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of new stores started to rise in 2016 to 5,000, remaining constant until 2018. Use synonyms
However
, in the final year, Linking Words
store
Use synonyms
openings
declined again to 3,000.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, store, closures, openings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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