The diagram below show how leather goods are produced
The diagram illustrates the process of
the
producing goods. There are 11 steps from drying different types of animal skin as a product, to showing off by taking brand leather bags and wearing shoes or boots.
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The first
step
is that the animal skin is dried and carried to the factory by lorries. Once the raw material is washed with the water and lime sufficiently, then
the product is soaked with only lime. The other step
is flattering by
the help of special machines. Change preposition
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But
the washing process is continued with the soaking water and vegetable matter for tannin.
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However
The next
step
is polishing
process which makes the skin as bright as Add an article
a polishing
the polishing
sun
. The polishing products are loaded onto lorries to produce. Having been manufactured in the factory, items including bags, shoes, leather jackets, balls and others are provided to sell to the customers who really enjoy Add an article
the sun
in
shopping. The final Change preposition
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step
is that make your own style with new leather closing
, shoes and bags.Fix the agreement mistake
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