Some people think that the money used to preserve historic buildings and artefacts should came from goverment funds, while others believe that private organisations and individuals should pay for this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many historical buildings and

artefacts

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taken many years to discover and

are

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originated from ancient civilization and colonization which tells the story of a

country

.

Therefore

, many argue that the government are responsible

to preserve

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for preserving

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those buildings

whereas

others oppose

this

notion and

says

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that private organisations and individuals should pay for

this

. Every

country

have

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their own ancient buildings and it

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a tourism

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tourism

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tourist

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attraction

spots

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spot

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particularly contributing to the major

ecomony

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economy

of a

country

.

For example

, Melaka has many of its old

old

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fort

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forts

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still standing beautifully and listed in the UNESCO

thus

contributing to the influx of tourists all

through

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throughout

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the year. History lovers, especially,

most

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likely to post

the

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beautiful

architecture

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architectural

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picture

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on their social media

thus

benefiting our

country

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tourism industry.

On the other hand

, many people argue government funds that

comes

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come

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from

tax payers

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taxpayers

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should be used more

judisciously

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judiciously

. Clearly, the reason for

this

is, not to burden the authority and

instead

the money should be better used to develop the

intrastructures

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infrastructures

infrastructure

of the

country

.

Besides

, in some places,

artefacts

are send

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to other countries for

further

study and many

archeologists

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archaeologists

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and universities come forward to fund these works.

Moreover

, these private bodies can be entrusted to preserve historical

biuldings

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buildings

and

artefacts

because they are passionate about

the

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history. In conclusion, it is important to preserve these ancient

artefacts

because these are national properties and invaluable for

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archeological

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archaeological

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studies and should be well taken care of

in

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responsible hands.