The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The marital
status
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of two countries is presented in two pie charts, those countries are
Canada
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and
Australia
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, the data are given in percentages.
Status
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is described depending on situations
such
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as married, divorced or widowed.
Overall
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, the trend in the proportions is accurately similar, with a few differences in the categorization of marital
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, the most common conditions in both nations are 'Separated but not divorced' and 'Married'.
Firstly
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,
Canada
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's population have a wider variety of conditions than Australian people, there is a condition term as '
Same sex
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marriage' that had not been taken into account by the Australian communities.
This
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value represents the 3% of marital
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in
Canada
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.
Secondly
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, in
Canada
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, the proportion of couples separated but not divorced is higher than in
Australia
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.
However
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, married couples in
Australia
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have better numbers than Canadian people.
In addition
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, the percentage of single
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is more probable in
Canada
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than in
Australia
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words status, canada, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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