The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of Amed Robbery
, Assault , and Murder
that happend
in London between the years 2003 Correct your spelling
happened
happen
until
2012 .
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and
Overall
, in
the Change preposition
at
beggining
of the Correct your spelling
beginning
period
, Amed Robbery
had the highest number
of crimes . As Correct your spelling
opposed
oppossed
to Mudrer which had the lowest amount . Correct your spelling
opposed
however
, Assaults had outraced the number
of Amed Robbery
in
the end of the Change the preposition
at
period
, while
murder
has
had a steady range.
In 2003 , both Unnecessary verb
apply
robbery
and murder
had an upward trend for short
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a short
period
of time . whereas
, around the year 2004 they had a down fall
. Correct your spelling
downfall
robbery
and murder
had reached their lowest point in 2008, at 1000 and 500 respectively .
In terms of the number
of Correct your spelling
assault
assult
it started at the beginning of the Add a comma
assult,
period
approximatley
around 2300 , Correct your spelling
approximately
then
it fluctuated over the 5 years until 2008 , were
it experienced a stable upward trend .Correct your spelling
where
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