The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.Yh table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.Yh table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.
Overall
, the table and chart above depict how
the
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police budgeting was organized and allocated during the years 2017 and 2018 with the respective figures and percentages mentioned.
Firstly
, in the table the
budget
is categorized into three sources, from which the national government made the largest part of share in
budget
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, it decreased in order with local taxes and
further
"other sources" with an even lesser amount for the
year
2017.
Furthermore
, comparing the prior
year
with the latter all figures for relevant sources have gained in number.
Secondly
, the matter of allocation of
budget
is displayed that divides the amount into three forms in types of "salaries" which made up the largest chunk of pie at 75% followed by "Buildings & Transport" at 17%,
while
"Technology' shared the lowest percentage.
Subsequently
comparing the figures between the two years there was a decrease in salaries in the latter
year
while
technology received the higher part in 2018, coming to technology gained the largest compared to the other two. In conclusion, generally, the
budget
grew over the later
year
in cost but somehow the priorities shifted when it came to funnelling the amount into different sections.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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