The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.Yh table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.
Overall
, the table and chart above depict how the
police budgeting was organized and allocated during the years 2017 and 2018 with the respective figures and percentages mentioned.
Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, in the table the budget
is categorized into three sources, from which the national government made the largest part of share in budget
, it decreased in order with local taxes and Add an article
the budget
further
"other sources" with an even lesser amount for the year
2017. Furthermore
, comparing the prior year
with the latter all figures for relevant sources have gained in number.
Secondly
, the matter of allocation of budget
is displayed that divides the amount into three forms in types of "salaries" which made up the largest chunk of pie at 75% followed by "Buildings & Transport" at 17%, while
"Technology' shared the lowest percentage. Subsequently
comparing the figures between the two years there was a decrease in salaries in the latter year
while
technology received the higher part in 2018, coming to technology gained the largest compared to the other two.
In conclusion, generally, the budget
grew over the later year
in cost but somehow the priorities shifted when it came to funnelling the amount into different sections.Submitted by toqeer44 on
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