The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flowchart provides key information about the steps of making cafe jars.
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, it is clear from the chart that the process of making a cup of
coffee
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is a multi-stage, complete process, starting with picking
coffee
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beans
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from farmers, drying, and roasting the
beans
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,
whereas
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the latter stages involve the actual transformation into products.
According to
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what is shown, the first group of steps involves picking the
beans
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from the trees by farmers, drying them under the sun, and putting the material in the roster. After roasting, is the cooling phase, the
beans
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are cooled rapidly and
subsequently
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ground into smaller fragments. These fragments are
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mixed with hot water. In terms of material transformation, the
coffee
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beans
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were strained from the mixture after that the mixture was processed in the freezer,
then
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ground into frozen liquid and dried in a vacuum.
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, these drying
coffee
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beans
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are packed into jars and ready to deliver.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, beans with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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