The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flowchart provides key information about the steps of making cafe jars.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the process of making a cup of coffee
is a multi-stage, complete process, starting with picking coffee
beans
from farmers, drying, and roasting the beans
, whereas
the latter stages involve the actual transformation into products.
According to
what is shown, the first group of steps involves picking the beans
from the trees by farmers, drying them under the sun, and putting the material in the roster. After roasting, is the cooling phase, the beans
are cooled rapidly and subsequently
ground into smaller fragments. These fragments are then
mixed with hot water.
In terms of material transformation, the coffee
beans
were strained from the mixture after that the mixture was processed in the freezer, then
ground into frozen liquid and dried in a vacuum. Finally
, these drying coffee
beans
are packed into jars and ready to deliver.Submitted by deemaalkhathlan1 on
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