You have a test in your English class next week, but you cannot attend. Write to your teacher. In your letter: . Explain your situation. . Apologies for not being able to take the test. . Ask whether it is possible for you to take the test at another time. Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any address. Begin your letter with: Dear...

Dear Mr Ori,
Im Writing
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I am writing
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finds
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you well and good mental, several days
i
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have
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some
problem
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in my hometown,
next
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day
i
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gonna
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doing
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going
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tess
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test
english, but, i
can
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not attend. first of all, several days ago
i
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had
bad
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experience when on my way suddenly
i
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fell
of
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the motorbike
made
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my arm
injuried
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injured
hence
i
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can
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not attend
tes
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the
english
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on monday. Sir, Im sorry
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can not attend
to
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class tomorrow, my arm
extremly
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extreme
paint
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pain
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, and now
iam
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I am
still
in
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my
uncle
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house
to
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medicine,
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broke
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and cannot normal
functioning
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, if
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attend
i
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believe that
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can not answer the question.
i
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would
like
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ask you, whether
i
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can retake
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the tes
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test
tes
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test
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on
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next week with my condition now,
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I am
iam
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I am
unable
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doing
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anything
i
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jus
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spend
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my time in
my
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bed,
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on
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this
week
i
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focuse
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tu
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recovering
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recovery
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of my
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my
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arm,
i
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hope you can understand my situation now. i looking forward
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you
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grammar and mechanics
Try to proofread your letter for spelling and grammatical errors. Make sure you use formal writing conventions such as correct punctuation and capitalization.
structuring ideas
Work on organizing your ideas better across paragraphs. Each paragraph should introduce a single idea and then provide some detail about that idea. This helps improve the clarity of your response.
task response
You explained the situation clearly and asked a relevant question about rescheduling the test. This shows that you understood the task.
formal tone
The tone of the letter was consistent. Even though there were grammatical issues, the formality required for writing to a teacher was maintained.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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