You have a test in your English class next week, but you cannot attend. Write to your teacher. In your letter: . Explain your situation. . Apologies for not being able to take the test. . Ask whether it is possible for you to take the test at another time. Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any address. Begin your letter with: Dear...
Dear Mr Ori,
Im Writing
Correct your spelling
I am writing
this
letter Fix the infinitive
to finds
finds
you well and good mental, several days Correct subject-verb agreement
find
i
Change the capitalization
I
have
some Wrong verb form
had
problem
in my hometown, Fix the agreement mistake
problems
next
day Correct article usage
the next
i
Change the capitalization
I
gonna
Verb problem
was
doing
Correct your spelling
going
tess
english, but, i Correct your spelling
test
can
not attend.
first of all, several days ago Wrong verb form
could
i
had Change the capitalization
I
bad
experience when on my way suddenly Add an article
a bad
i
fell Change the capitalization
I
of
the motorbike Replace the word
off
made
my arm Correct word choice
and made
injuried
Correct your spelling
injured
hence
i
Change the capitalization
I
can
not attend Wrong verb form
could
tes
Correct your spelling
the
english
on monday.
Sir, Im sorry Change the capitalization
English
i
can not attend Change the capitalization
I
to
class tomorrow, my arm Change preposition
apply
extremly
Correct your spelling
extreme
paint
, and now Correct your spelling
pain
iam
still Correct your spelling
I am
in
my Change preposition
at
uncle
house Change noun form
uncle's
to
medicine,Change preposition
for
in addition
my motorbike is broke
and cannot normal Wrong verb form
broken
functioning
, if Replace the word
function
i
attend Change the capitalization
I
i
believe that Change the capitalization
I
i
can not answer the question.
Change the capitalization
I
i
would Change the capitalization
I
like
ask you, whether Add the particle
like to
i
can retake Change the capitalization
I
Correct article usage
the tes
Correct article usage
the tes
Correct your spelling
test
tes
Correct your spelling
test
Change preposition
apply
on
next week with my condition now, Change preposition
apply
Correct your spelling
I am
iam
unable Correct your spelling
I am
Wrong verb form
to do
doing
anything Change the verb form
to do
i
Change the capitalization
I
Correct your spelling
just
jus
Correct your spelling
just
spend
my time in Wrong verb form
spent
my
bed, Correct pronoun usage
apply
Change preposition
apply
on
Change preposition
apply
this
week i
Change the capitalization
I
focuse
Wrong verb form
am focusing
tu
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on tu
Replace the word
recovering
recovery
Replace the word
recovering
Change preposition
of my
my
arm, Change preposition
of my
i
hope you can understand my situation now.
i looking forward Change the capitalization
I
seeing
youChange preposition
to seeing
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grammar and mechanics
Try to proofread your letter for spelling and grammatical errors. Make sure you use formal writing conventions such as correct punctuation and capitalization.
structuring ideas
Work on organizing your ideas better across paragraphs. Each paragraph should introduce a single idea and then provide some detail about that idea. This helps improve the clarity of your response.
task response
You explained the situation clearly and asked a relevant question about rescheduling the test. This shows that you understood the task.
formal tone
The tone of the letter was consistent. Even though there were grammatical issues, the formality required for writing to a teacher was maintained.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,