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You recently received an invitation to a dinner party at your friend's house. Write a letter to accept the invitation. In your letter: - explain why you are accepting the invitation - describe why you are looking forward to the dinner party - offer to bring a dish to share Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses.

#invitation #dinner #party #friend #house #offer #dish #addresses
Dear Olive, I am writing
this
 letter
finds
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 you well and good mental,
Im
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I
 recently an invitation to a
dinner
party
 from you.
Im
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I'm
 glad that you still remember me
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for
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due to
long
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a long
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 time
no see with
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without seeing
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 you. First of all, thank
for
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you for
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 your invitation, as it
happen
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happened
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 next week I have
day
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a day
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 off and
i
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I
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 will go to your
dinner
party
 and
im
 cannot
wait
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wait to
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 meet
with
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apply
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our old
friend
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friends
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,
moreover
 we the
last
meet
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to meet
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graduated
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at the campus. I am looking forward to
dinner
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the dinner
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party
, there are many
story
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 I will to you
especially
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, especially
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on
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about
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 my journey during work at the company we will
spent
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spend
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night
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the night
a night
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 together
have
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apply
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with
out
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our
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friend
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friends
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 after
such
 a long time.
Im
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I'm
offer
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offers
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 to bring some
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snacks
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snack
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snacks
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to
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for
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to
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 eat
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together
togheter
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together
, it is
such
 a coincidence my
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mother's
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mother
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mother's
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 hobby
is make
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is making
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 a cake and he ordered me
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to
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for
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to
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 bring
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it at
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it at
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to
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at
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to
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 your
dinner
party
. I Looking forward to seeing you
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grammar
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy to improve clarity and readability.
structure
Work on sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences and fragmented thoughts.
structure
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and avoids mixing different topics.
task
The letter addresses all parts of the prompt: acceptance, anticipation, and the offer to bring food.
tone
Positive and enthusiastic tone, which is suitable for accepting a friend's invitation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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