The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliance and amount of time spent doing houswork in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featurs and make comparison where relevant
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This
chart illustrates the changes in percentages of families
using electrical tools and the amount of time taken to do the housework in a particular country in
between 1920 and 2019.
Briefly, we can see significantly that, the more households owned electrical appliances the less time Change preposition
apply
needed
to do the housework each week. Add a missing verb
was needed
Overall
, families
bought refrigerators and vacuum cleaners in increasing trend whereas
washing machines faced a slow increase.
Astonishingly, no families
owned a refrigerator in 1920 as there was 0% in 1920 but dramatically raised to 90% in 40 years and then
reached 100% between 1980 and 2019. However
, 30% of families
owned vacuum cleaners in 1920 and saw significantly
gradual increase over the years until it reached 100% in 2000. Apparently, washing machines were the highest number Add an article
a significantly
electrical
appliances in 1920 but the increase was not so smooth and were the lowest percentage of ownership in 2019 with only 75% when compared to the other two appliances.
Change preposition
of electrical
Lastly
, families
used to do housework for 50 hours per week in 1920 and there was about 30 hours drop in 1960 and a more gradual decrease between 1960 and 2019 when it finally
reached 10 hours per week.Submitted by coke_sars on
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