U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1

You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030).

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart depicts the percentage of
the
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U.S
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U.S.
energy consumption by fuel from 1980-2023.
Overall
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, petrol and oil were by far the most used,
although
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coal fast grew over the period,
while
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natural gas was stable ,
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nuclear ,solar and hydropower were less used In 1980. Regarding fossil fuels,
such
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as coal,natural gas,petrol and oil,they have seen
stady
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steady
increases in energy
consumpion
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consumption
since 1980.Petrol and oil started at 35
quadrillion
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units
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in 1980,
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fluctuated until 2000
then
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grow
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with a percentage over 45
quadrillion
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by 2030.
Addilionlly
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,coll followed
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rising trend it is predicted that it
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will
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overpass 30
quadrillion
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by 2030. Natural
gass
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grass
gas
demonstrate
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fluctuation and it
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a level off at around 24
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.
In contrast
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,
cleener
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cleaner
energy fule
sousces
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sources
,all began the period under 5quadrillion
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ans
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and
showed declines in their use,with the exception of nuclear
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climbed
slightly to 6
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in 2005.solar/wind followed
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trend.
Hadropower
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Hydropower
has remained
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lowest of 3.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words quadrillion, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • fuel sources
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • renewable energy
  • hydroelectric
  • solar
  • wind
  • fossil fuels
  • upward trend
  • fluctuations
  • nuclear energy
  • steady increase
  • environmental concerns
  • technological advancements
  • projections
  • reliant
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