U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart depicts the percentage of
the
Correct article usage
apply
U.S
energy consumption by fuel from 1980-2023.
Correct your spelling
U.S.
Overall
, petrol and oil were by far the most used,although
coal fast grew over the period,while
natural gas was stable ,while
nuclear ,solar and hydropower were less used
In 1980.
Regarding fossil fuels,such
as coal,natural gas,petrol and oil,they have seen stady
increases in energy Correct your spelling
steady
consumpion
since 1980.Petrol and oil started at 35 Correct your spelling
consumption
quadrillion
units
in 1980,then
fluctuated until 2000 then
grow
with a percentage over 45 Wrong verb form
grew
quadrillion
units
by 2030.Addilionlly
,coll followed Correct your spelling
Additionally
similar
rising trend it is predicted that it Correct article usage
a similar
well
overpass 30 Correct your spelling
will
quadrillion
units
by 2030. Natural gass
Correct your spelling
grass
gas
demonstrate
fluctuation and it Correct subject-verb agreement
demonstrates
set
a level off at around 24 Wrong verb form
sets
quadrillion
units
.
In contrast
,cleener
energy fule Correct your spelling
cleaner
sousces
,all began the period under 5quadrillion Correct your spelling
sources
units
ans
showed declines in their use,with the exception of nuclear Correct your spelling
and
cilmbed
slightly to 6 Correct your spelling
climbed
quadrillion
units
in 2005.solar/wind followed similar
trend. Add an article
a similar
Hadropower
has remained Correct your spelling
Hydropower
the
lowest of 3.Change preposition
at the
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quadrillion, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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