The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the changes
of
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tempreture
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temperature
in two cities from Africa which are
Cape
Town
And
Mombasa
, and one city from
Eygpt
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Egypt
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that is
Cairo .
Overall
,
Mombasa
and
Cape
Town
had a downward trend
then
rised
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raised
rose
rise
up .
However
, Cairo experienced an upward trend , reached its highest point
then
fell down . In January ,
Mombasa
and
Cape
Town
tempreture
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temperature
was
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80 and 70 respectively .
Mombasa
's
tempreture
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temperature
slightly
incresed
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increased
in May , but had a fluctuation which decreased its
tempreture
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temperature
at
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July , reaching its lowest point at 75 c ,
then
gradually went up
at the end
of the period . In
compartion
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comparison
with
Cape
Town
which had drastically declined in
july
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July
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that
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caused it to reach its minimum degree at 55 c. In terms of
egypt
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Egypt
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, at the
beggining
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beginning
of the period it started at 55c ,
then
moderately rose its
tempreture
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temperature
where it led to its highest point
at
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july
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July
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at approximately 80
degree
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degrees
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.
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