The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the changes
of
Change preposition
in
tempreture
in two cities from Africa which are Correct your spelling
temperature
Cape
Town
And Mombasa
, and one city from Eygpt
Correct your spelling
Egypt
Verb problem
,
that is
Cairo .
Overall
, Mombasa
and Cape
Town
had a downward trend then
rised
up . Correct your spelling
raised
rose
rise
However
, Cairo experienced an upward trend , reached its highest point then
fell down .
In January , Mombasa
and Cape
Town
tempreture
Correct your spelling
temperature
was
80 and 70 respectively . Change the verb form
were
Mombasa
's tempreture
slightly Correct your spelling
temperature
incresed
in May , but had a fluctuation which decreased its Correct your spelling
increased
tempreture
Correct your spelling
temperature
at
July , reaching its lowest point at 75 c , Change preposition
in
then
gradually went up at the end
of the period . In compartion
with Correct your spelling
comparison
Cape
Town
which had drastically declined in july
Change the capitalization
July
that
caused it to reach its minimum degree at 55 c.
In terms of Correct pronoun usage
apply
egypt
, at the Change the capitalization
Egypt
beggining
of the period it started at 55c , Correct your spelling
beginning
then
moderately rose its tempreture
where it led to its highest point Correct your spelling
temperature
at
Change preposition
in
july
at approximately 80 Change the capitalization
July
degree
.Change to a plural noun
degrees
Submitted by nouf.alkhalaifi2 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words tempreture, cape, town, mombasa with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!