U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1

You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030).

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line chart
illustraes
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illustrates
the information about U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel
during
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from
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1980 to 2030.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the rate of
petroal
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petrol
and oil has a higher trend during these years.
According to
what was shown,
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • fuel sources
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • renewable energy
  • hydroelectric
  • solar
  • wind
  • fossil fuels
  • upward trend
  • fluctuations
  • nuclear energy
  • steady increase
  • environmental concerns
  • technological advancements
  • projections
  • reliant
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