The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa, subscribing to move by and fixed line phones from 1994 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa, subscribing to move by and fixed line phones from 1994 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many African people used mobile phones and fixed-line telephones between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend in both given communication services fixed and mobile contact. In the beginning, the propulsion for using fixed communication services was higher than its counterpart, but it was surpassed in the
last
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four years.
Initially
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, the number of people in Africa who used fixed-line phones started at 1.7%, after which S witnessed a gradual rise by 1.3% in 2001.
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, the figure for mobile dial increased slowly to around 0.06 in the first two years, but it rose significantly to 3% in 2001, overtaking that for fixed residential phone services. The proportion of fixed-lineline phones used by Africans saw a little growth
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reached 3.1% in the final year. Meanwhile, that of mobile contact grew dramatically from 3% in 2001
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hit the highest point at 8.8% in 2004.
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