The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Autralian cities. Summarise the inforamation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Autralian cities.

Summarise the inforamation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
This
bar chart illustrates the percentage of regular purchasing and consuming
coffee
and
tea
by Australian
people
in different cities.
Overall
, many
people
in Melbourne and
Hobart
went to a café for
coffee
and
tea
in the
last
4
weeks
.
Besides
, in Sydney and Melbourne, buying fresh
coffee
was more popular.
Also
, in
Hobart
and Brisbane, many residents bought instant
coffee
. It can be seen that around 64% of
people
and 63% of them went to a café for
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
4
weeks
in Melbourne and
Hobart
respectively,
while
the lowest value was dedicated to Adelaide with just under 50% of
people
. In Adelaide, 50% of individuals bought instant
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
. Of course,
this
amount of
people
was lower than Brisbane and
Hobart
with around 53% and about 54% respectively. By looking deeply at
this
chart, many Australian
people
went to a café for
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
4
weeks
in all cities except Adelaide. Plus, buying fresh
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
was unpopular in all cities.
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