the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that openen in one country between 2011-2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparasis where relevant
The line graph illustrates
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the opening and closing of shops in a country between the years of 2011 and 2018. From viewing Change preposition
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this
graph, we are able to see some data on shops.
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Firstly
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in
the year Change preposition
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2011, was the highest recorded amount of stores opening in the country. Closures Change preposition
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however
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also
close to the amount of openings, with a difference of only around 2000 between the two. Linking Words
Subsequently
, in 2012, the release of new stores took a drop, Linking Words
while
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them
shutting down barely changed. Correct pronoun usage
their
However
, releases of establishments slowly increased between the years of 2013 to 2014. Linking Words
In addition
, the shutting down of establishments seemed to pause, with less than 1000 stopping business for good in the year Linking Words
of
2015.
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Overall
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this
graph is able to show us how stores Linking Words
arent
consistent and always fluctuating. There Correct your spelling
aren't
isnt
a guarantee on if they will remain open for years or if they will close business in less than 2.Correct your spelling
isn't
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