You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Maha, I hope you are doing great, I am writing to you as you are seeking
learning driving
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to learn to drive
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. First of all, I advise you to search
about
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driving essentials, so you will have a general perspective about it. And
then
, I recommend you
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the licence of driving, so that you have the permission to go anywhere you would like to go all over the country.
Also
, you can visit the GCC countries that are near to us when got the licence.
Secondly
, in our city there is a school called IAU that might help you learn more about driving and be an expert in driving in the future, they provide
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apply
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lessons and
measures
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your knowledge by
making
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taking
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an
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exams, and actual training using the cars.
Furthermore
, be
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careful
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when you are driving, to avoid any accidents. Take care and if you have more questions about that matter feel free to
massge
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message
massage
me. Best wishes, Almutairi
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complete response
The letter covers all the bullet points required by the task, but there are a few areas that can be improved for better clarity. For instance, specifying the advantages of having a driving license more clearly could enhance the response.
logical structure
Consider breaking down the longer sentences into shorter ones for better readability. Additionally, make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity and coherence.
single idea per paragraph
There is a small spelling error in the word 'message.' Attention to such minor details can make the writing more polished.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate and friendly, which suit the informal tone of the letter well.
complete response
The letter addresses all parts of the task, giving advice on why a driving license is advantageous, recommending a driving school, and offering extra tips.
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