You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The maps provide key information about the changes that have taken place in Langley town between 1910 and 1950.

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, it is clear from the graph that in 1910, showed

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numerous

residental

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residential

facilities

accros

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across

all the town of Langley.

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, the 1910 layout Demonstrated a complex design with several housing,

where as

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whereas

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......

According to

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what is shown, in 1910 there

was

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were

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many households in

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a town

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town house

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townhouse

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with

jordan

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Jordan

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street being in the middle. A store and a laundry, opposing the cafe shop in Sherman

streat

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street

streets

were situated centrally on the map and the households were around the

erea

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area

. The railway workers' cottages were situated next to

railway

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the railway

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line, which is beside the Townhouses

also

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the factory was

lied

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same

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the same

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street but on the opposite side of

railway

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the railway

a railway

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line.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

131 words

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