You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery - Explain the importance of this delivery - Ask for a replacement item to be sent

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that the delivery I received through your service provider was not complete.

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week on 21-Jun I

had

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made a purchase online from your website for a cycle with side-support wheels for my daughter so that she can learn cycling. But unfortunately, the delivery I received was without any supporting wheels in the box. Without the supporting

wheels

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wheels,

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it is impossible for her to learn how to cycle.

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Also

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I noticed the color was faded and had

few

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a few

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scratches around the cycle I would like to kindly request you to arrange for a replacement soon as possible

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since

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was supposed to be a surprise gift for her birthday which is in two

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time. I urge you to deliver it by your fast delivery services so that it can arrive on time. Awaiting your feedback and appreciate your soonest action. Thanks & Regards, Vipin Abraham

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Jun 26, 2024

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greeting and closing

Provide a more specific greeting, such as 'Dear Customer Service Team,' to make your letter sound more personalised and direct.

single idea per paragraph

Ensure that each paragraph has only one main idea to improve clarity.

logical structure

Rephrase some sentences for better clarity and to avoid repetition. For example, you can combine similar ideas into one sentence.

task achievement

Your letter clearly states what you ordered and what was missing, fulfilling the task requirements.

suitable writing tone

You used a polite tone throughout the letter, making it appropriate for the situation.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

158 words

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